Wowwww...I don't care what other people say...this poem is probably my most favorite that i've ever read..it made me think and made me afraid at the same time...Your poems are soo good, and i'm becomgin such a great fan of yours...That poem touched me in a waY i can't explain, and I hope that we'll see eachother one judgement day...To show all them people who do'nt belive...that you was right...................

Hey..I just wanted to let you know, that I want you to read my poem called...Christ is there, don't doubt..I think that you might enjoy it..g'bye hun

I tried to write a poem on this same sort of line about 5 years ago, and left it unfinished and eventually abandoned it, as it wasn't good, and I found it very hard to progress with. And that is why I take my hat off to you Kevin for writing this wonderful piece of work.

Awesome Kevin....absolutely amazing! there's a one of mine I'd like you to read...and comment on, if you will... "The Apppointment" (well, and any of them! LOL)

as for your other commenters, I say, it doesn't matter whether or not you like it or agree with it, it is true. And it's not because God is evil or unforgiving, it is because He is just!

The actual poem was really good. You have a great talent for writing, although I have to agree with AI's comment. I don't believe in god, etc, and I like the fact that you portrayed him as a slave-driving, power-hungry madman, so great job.

Great poem. You write with emotions and give views that not many people consider or write about, i respect this. I myself don't beleive in a god as such either. Very well done, you deffinatly have talent.

Maybe if you have time you could take a look at my work. I'd love to receive a comment/critique from you.

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Now this is truly brilliant poem- i've often wondered what would it would be like, if jugement day ever happened and i think you're poem is probably very close to the anwser. your're really talented and once agian thanx for the nice comments about my poems. uh and no i didn't write "Does heaven have a phone number" but i wished i had. its my favorite poem, thats why i put it up. anyways i better stop babbling xmollyxx