by Rusted x Heart Nov 7, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
So let this veil of secrecy, |
"my" not "me" correction for above comment. In my haste to comment, I forgot check before hitting the magic button! :) |
Great choice of words and like others, I loved the last stanza. The title though is what captured me attention to read as I skimmed through the long list of available poems. Being curious ... I had to stop and see! Nice work. |
by Loulou
This is my favorite one by far |
by ShadowDancer
The last stanza blows me away. i had to coem back and read it again. as with all ur poems, meaningful and powerful. |
by Darien
That's a really creative poem. It was really sad, but I enjoyed it alot. Keep it up :) |