...I'm stunned. That is definitely one of the best poems I've read on this side. What a great vocabulary and such a meaning... wow. I really am speechless. Fantastic poem. Wow. Full points, definitely.

This is really really good and you are a very talented writer. :)

That's a really creative poem. It was really sad, but I enjoyed it alot. Keep it up :)

The last stanza blows me away. i had to coem back and read it again. as with all ur poems, meaningful and powerful.

Ruby

This is my favorite one by far
i love the meaning of it i love the last stanza and what it means
you are such an awesome poet
great job
tabby

Great choice of words and like others, I loved the last stanza. The title though is what captured me attention to read as I skimmed through the long list of available poems. Being curious ... I had to stop and see! Nice work.

"my" not "me" correction for above comment. In my haste to comment, I forgot check before hitting the magic button! :)