No it is actually really good! It meant a lot to read it, I read it over and over, and can feel so much meaning in it. Great job! 5/5!!

Ash

Hmm...very nice...I like it...your friends are so lucky to have you(like I said)...very nice...

Meaning full and very passionate, a loving peice to someone well done *claps* your getting there hun

Jenn
5

He's more than a friend why didn't u tell me now i worry about him.