This is pretty good! plz comment on more of mine!

I know how that feels from past experiences, but believe me if they broke your heart then they don't deserve you. great poem! 5/5
~Left_2_Die~

Dont you hate it when we are wrong i thought my man had all he could ever want with me i gave him everything i could and he just took advantage of me and it hurts so much i would of given him the world but he wanted more he was not happy so i had to set him free i had to realize that i relationship is not based on give and give only i just be able to recieve also you love some one but no matter how much it hurts to say goodbye there has to be some line you just draw and say enough but remember this for ever ending there is a new beginning

Awww i like this one thanks for the comment on mine but i think your are way better mine are sorta more complicated ut yours are so cute and so true i have that feeling likt you discribe and it apeals to me.

We have to live and learn from our mistakes and one day you will find that person in who you will spend the rest of your life with

This is really good its kinda in the same format that i write in ! lol thanks for the comment if i need some one to talk to ill let u no thanks soo much u dont no how much it helps just noing that!

Hey Kayla. how come I'm just starting to find people, AFTER they comment on my poems??? I hope I see more of your stuff.

By the way, it wasnt my mum's bf. It was my great uncle. If you want to know more, you know where to find me.

Luv Niquee
XOXOXOXO

Hey, I liked your poem, It's very good. I thank you for commenting on my poem too. Thanks