Hey..wow i like this poem? hope this person is ok..
the repitition was effective and the words meaningful..
great poem xoxo

This is a lovely and heartfelt poem to your angel. Full points on this beautiful write. Be well poet.

~Sherry~

Now it's one of my favourites...man...u just awesome...I still can't believe u r only 12...if someone out there read ur poems and not knowing who u r...trust me...they will think u r a 21 year old guy(not that it's bad...not at all..)...u just seem to go through many things...that is so weird(I mean what i feel)...like u r an elder brother 2 me...and I'm actually older than u by 3 years...man...that's weird...lol...neway...u rock...forever...and thanks again 4 the comment...hev been a great friend 2 me...lol...

You are definately one of my favorite poets! This poem almost made me cry as I can relate to how this "angel" might feel right now. Keep up the good work. email me any time hauntedbymydarkmemories@yahoo.com
-Sami

Great! Its sad and makes you wonder. Your poems are the best I've ever read.

- Ali

I loved this poem! its so beautiful... i love the way it flowed and it was so sad but yet full of hope! i cant believe your only tweleve!!!!!! haha but i want to read more of your writing so i'll end this.
xo adge

This is an awesome poem! you have lots of talent, keep it up. I really like all of your poems.

That poem was extremely good and out of the poems i have read on here it sounds to me as if you are one of the best writers this poem really touched me and you are an excellent writer. 5/5.
~Chelsey

Wow this poem really speaks to me since ive been through so much just keep up the great work

your fan
crystal

Well written, i loved how it repeated, idk, in this poem it was just really... um, i don't know the point is i thought it was a good one. ur a great writer and i cant believe ur only my age... its crazy, good job!!!
-always,
cari

I'm trying so hard not to cry. this poem is SO beautiful, it truly is. You are such a talented writer, i know everyone says that, but it's the truth. You are wise beyond your years, and reading your poetry is like being hugged. They are all filled with such heartfelt emotion. Anyone who knows you is very lucky, and your girlfriend is the luckiest of them all.

please, never stop writing, you are the hope on the horizon for so many.

always,
xXx

I love your poems you have such a way with words.....
SG

I love this poem and you have an fantastic gift and you use it well good luck in all you write and everything you do...

That's so beautiful, I don't know what else to say, 5/5 goes without saying by now... Wow

Matt. I like readin this on...September 29. and i remember LAST YEAR the conversation we had that made you write this for me. I love you so much. ur a great brother :]. keep writing. it keeps me going as well