Great i loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

What a beautiful poem, i realy loved it, so much feeling
well done
take care xx

It's good... so-so... keep it up!

Your poem really spoke to me... I've been there and can really relate to your words! Very good! BTW thank you for your nice comment on mine :)

This poem is really great. I like it a lot.

Loved it , I felt heart and passion and that is what makes a awesome writer

Hey there!!! loved it. LOved it loved it loved it!!! the way it flowed the way it just..... *sighs* beautiful honey. thanx 4 commenting on my poem... lol... that was my bad one lol!!!! *hugs* c u round

I didn't know then but I do know now. 5/5 my friend.

I really liked your poem. you did a great job. write more
5/5
♥amanda

This is a good poem. I really like the way you wrote the words and how they rhymed. I hope to read more of yours soon.

~Matt~

Wow! you are an excellent poet!

Beautiful...you are an amazing writer...I love all your poems even though I may not hve time to comment them all. Thank you for the comments on my poems too they mean alot to me.

YOU REALLY ARE AN AWSOME WRITER!!

I LOVE YOUR POEMS!!!!!

I lyk dis 1 cuz i can relate. Once more as seen by ur poems u have lots of talent.
-HUGS N KISSES!

I hear ya. Anyway, excellent poem.

-Taylor

Ive been in those shoes and it was real. Keep writing and thanx for keeping it real.~Miss A.

Awww I can relate to that poem..I like it a lot

I loved the poem. Was it a true felling? Because I know how it fells to watch loved one walk away. If it was true everything will be fine at the end NO ONE DESORVED YOUR TEARS THE ONE THAT DESORVES THEM WOULD NOT LET YOU CRY

Oh hun this poked a hole through my heart!! Shivers girl, i thought for a second there you were describing my life not yours!!! It was that realistic!! Amazing!! You really have a way with words!!
luv jess xoxo

Wow is all i can say even thought i read it a million times i still cry because i feel the same way it hurts to see the one you love just leave you all by your self!!!!!

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