Torn By Deception

by Ike Dizzle   Nov 8, 2005


Lead into this world and not sure if anything it right,
It seems like nothing is even to your delight,
Lost, with no one to trust,
Everything is tempting but you are trying to adjust,
In a place where lies run wild,
In a place where kindness is very mild,
In a place where it is hard to breathe,
Sometimes I just wonder how long my blood will seethe,
There is no where to rest,
You are heart is beating out of control in your chest,
Now you are passed out on the ground,
Lost in your own mind, no where to be found,
Now you have awaken tangled in lies,
And forced to hear everything that you despise,
And now, in this twisted conception,
You feel ever so torn by deception.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Bradley Peter

    This was okay. I think the best thing about this piece was some of the rhymes, like 'trust - adjust'. I think that this piece also needed to have the lines at a simular length, to help it flow better.

    Brad

  • 17 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    This is painful, but wonderfully expressed! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Sorefromreality

    I absolutely loved this poem! it was amazing...it reminds me of some areas in my life...i loved it! it was very vague yet specific...made u rly think...and i believe thjats wut good poetry should do...
    love ya lots,
    sore

  • 18 years ago

    by ComplexChild

    That was so good.i really could relate to how you feel.keep it up...

    ~the one and only complexchild

  • 18 years ago

    by *~Emma~*

    I love your use of words, this poem is great, you've done an awsum job! well done!...............luv em

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