Wow.. such a sad piece but beautiful nonetheless.. it was veyr heart-felt and heart-touching.. brilliant.. i especially love the 2 stanzas in the middle.. however, ur last stanza started out well, but the last 2 lines were kinda feeble to me.. o well, bak 2 being an airhead now that skul's over :P.. but overall, beautiful poem and powerful message.. so sad..
hope ur OK
take care
NannOthnx 4 ur comment

I love your work this poem was really good i liked the end. thankyou for commenting my poem thanx xxx
love jessica grace

Aw this is so beautiful, you really do have talent hun, ive never read anything like this yet, you are a very unique and fantastic writer, keep on doing a great job!, take care xxoo

Wow amazing poem. full of emotion.. very well written.. keep it up
thanks for commenting on mine too.
dee

Thankyou :]

Wow...that was amazing...it's so meaning full...and has so much emotion in it...i luv it...

Wow- really sad....it keeps the reading involved and anticipating the next line...very very good-Jenn

Strong imagery has made the poem vivd...well done, enjoyed reading it.