I loved it. It just rang out power of free speach to me. How words can shed burnt outer skin and set a person's soul free. So they can live... very beautiful my dear.
-A

Absolutely gorgeous. =] Your writings never cease to amaze me. You're definitely one of my all time favorite poets.

Keep up the great work. =] God bless.

The symbolism was perfect here. and the sound and rythem was like a song.
you convey emotion beautifully