So beautiful written,
incredible!

xxx

Heartaches glisten its lashes,
Thousands of tears kept at bay.
Saw all the painful scenes,
But no strength to look away

My favorite part...if no one could relate to any other part of the poem they could relate to this as I believe most people have experience such. Whether it was good, bad or horrible....some times you just can't look away. This is truly an awesome write...I haven't read your poetry in a while...Glad to be back.

This is wonderfully written. So deep and heartfelt. Great writing! Well done on winning the contest too... Well deserved! :)

Awwwwwwww, Congrats on making it to the front page!!!!!!!!! Beautiful work....magnificent, Atomic.

CONGRATULATIONS!!! well deserved... excellent job. I enjoyed this immensely.

keep up the good work

This was a amazing work of art it really touched my soul great work
take care
HS

So heartfelt, with a great rhyme thing going on and full of emotion. u really are a gd poet and no how to bring your feelings accros, hop. and i no how u feel. e u feel better soon. take care. 5/5

Magnifico! 5/5

-Taylor

Very Touching and Beautiful

This poem is touching. Very heartfelt.

It is a great poem and if you would please send it to katie12@valornet.com
oh and when you send it then send your name to please so whe can chat back and forth.
laterez

Amazing poem! Keep up the good work!

Oh my goodness!! this poem is really excellent! keep up the good work! 5/5

This was most excellent and moving. Your words and prose indulges your every reader.

I look forward to reading more from you.

That was magnificent!!!words cant explain what it was but im speechless

I love this poem it's really great.

That is a GREAT GREAT GREAT poem! I absolutely LOVE it! you did an EXCELLENT job! Keep writing!

Wow its lush. keep it up, loving your work. take care
polly

Omg...that was so sad it made me cry...really really great job..breathtaking i love it.
xxxweepingxxxx

O my gosh. that was one of the most beautifullest poem i have ever hear. it was so emotional, with sorrow. you do such a great job. keep on writing. i can pick a faorite verse but i did like the last 2. ^_^
~KT~