This poem is very good. being able to read someones poem and relate on an emotional level as i did ths one is amazing! great job

That's BEAUTIFUL!!

That is such a sad but beautiful poem....you could used your emotions in a good way

Beautifully sad, Atomic. As usual your words weave a cocoon of emotion around my heart. The flow and the imagery are magnificent in this poem. Well done:)

You really conveyed sadness of this poem.

You really conveyed sadness of this poem.

The sorrows of yesterday,
Reflected brightly in its shine.
Its innocence and loneliness,
Became one as it entwine.

We wow we wow wow wow wow.

That was so cool! Yay, your poems rock.

I like this poem it nice.

Your poem was great it was heart breaking 2!u have my vote

You go girl! an excellent job!!

Omg, that has so much emotion in it! great job!

JoAnne,

wow,i just registered and that was the first poem i read,fantastic,it brought bk memories and feelings i have had in the past but u nailed the words that shud of then been expressed xxx

Great poem!! so touching wonder where u got the ideas from

Very well written....5/5

Dang, this was a TERRRRIFIC poem! I really like it! Good job Peace!

My heart can relate to this poem. I would have said that this was extremely touching and emotional also that its a great poem but you already know that. You conveyed the right emotions just by mere words. Alot/most people can't express emotions at such depth as you have. I had tears running down my cheeks and I sympathized with the persona and I couldn't feel the personas emotions and for that one moment I felt like my heart was breaking inside. It was such a beautiful poem.

That i could feel the personas emotions////// i meant to say :S sorry!

Really fantastic poem with great use of imagery and rhyme well done!

Fantastic

I am touched....This was beautiful and sad, and it moved me to tears