Hey, nice poem.
I liked the idea behind it, you've used a good choice of words, i liked it alot.

Thanks for your comment, i really appreciate it.

xxx cici xxx

I realy liked the style of writing it was good stong statments.

Very nicely written..
5/5 none to less xx:

blaine *> : PainOfOne

Only one thing to say- love all your work very differnt but effective keep going

Wow you have some amazing poems, including this one. the one thing i didnt like was the last line, but i cant really suggest something bc its hard to end poems in this style. but great job.

Thanks to all, I will continue to visit your work and enjoy..