Wow, i see where this is headed. it had a really good line of thought behind it but the first and second stsanza didn't flow really nicely. great work thoguh. rock on, man. hardcore
-Suzie

Great poem can feel where you going with it
keep writeing
you got sum good talant

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Thankyou for your time
Matt

Im sorry
I really am
I wish i hDNT BEEN SO STUPID
sorry i cant spell
sorry sorry sorry
I miss you
sorry

Thats really great...really. 5/5. I hope everything is okay?