Hi, Well to be honest, even i feel the same..."confused" but u wrote it nicely and the selection of words were good. Keep it up and take care. Love*** Nitin Mongia

Confuse me too...wait...I'll read it another time...

Okey...now I get it...hmm...can actually picture the scene too...hey..this can make a good movie...lol...very good...I like it too...

WEoah hun this is very deep I loved it it was really dark and unique and not to mention very expressive amazing job on this one hunn, well done keep it up

Its dark but i like it! i think its rele good. omg your comments made me feel sooo much better. thanks so much. your such a good friend!!!! know that i am ALWAYS here for you. luv ya! ~lex

Hey this was heaps interesting hope everythings ok..great writing as always xxx

Hey, This was an awsome poem, so dark and everything it is AWSOME i think, if you want to know i have thought about doing some of this at times when i was upset and down, WELL LOVED THE POEM, you got talent...KEEP WRITIN xoxo

Great poem it was deep!!!!!!!!!!!!

Woah hun.. that was a very awesome poem.. woah i hope ur ok.. remebr i love ya.. im always here 4 u!! keep ur head up high.. n live ur life even if i dont!! xoxoxmwa

Whether it was random thoughts or not id say it was a great poem keep it up
take care
HS

Wow, this is a really good poem
the greatest poems happen when you're not forcing them and when you're not sure what exactly you're writing about.

Good Job
5/5

DemonChild

It's ok to be confused, as long as you realize it, so then you can get help

this poem was dark, lovely and descriptive, and overall a very nice poem

I loved the poem and the memories it brought back seems so real. I like the fact that you wrote what you feel. Hey keep up the good work and if you have a chance look up Afterlife on mine and please comment if nothing else

Well glad to know it's not true. but it's a good poem put together well. keep up the good work 5.5

Its friking awsome!!!!! *-* woot

Amazingly written!!!
its sweet and true. I can feel the words from inside!!!
keep it up
much luv
NemO x0x0x0x0x