I don't really know who you are...but what I do know...is you are a great poet...great friend...great person...and...an amazing girl...this poem touches me deeply...I love it... |
Ohh AMAZING, wow I loved this one it's really unique andawesomee I hope everythings ok with you hun if you ever need to talk im always here for ya |
by Matters
That was truly amazing. One of the best I've read. It was so sad but so great... Wow. Judging by that alone, I'm adding you to my favorites. Nice job. Full points. |
I love it!!!! god all your poems are soooooo good! i know exactly how you feel. i like the part "If I tell myself I'm ok, |
Hey i can really understand where you are coming from..i loved this its really comforting somehow...xxxx |
by JAY Poet
Wow i loved it this was great keep up the good work!!!!!!!!!!! |
by Timothy B
We decise how we feel. We decide who we will be. Nobody can change this. |
The way you play with words specially while you are searching for yourself in this poem...its so touching!!! Gosh!! do you write for 25 hrs out of 24?? |
by Jacklyn
Great poem i use to feel like this all the time so i can really relate. poetry though has changed me. i began to feel better with the person i have become and have made changes to make myself happier. don't worry you'll find yourself! love the poem and the topic it can speak to many. |
by Polly
Aw that is so good. its amazing, its written beautifully and its so sad. keep it up 5* |
Wow! Definitely a 5! I like it because I can relate. I can't complain about my life either but sometimes I get so down and I do complain. I feel such loathing for some people when I know it's probably a little unfair. I hardly feel the pain I used to feel, though it does occassionally hurt still. I'll never be the same either. I think this could be a justification for so many things for me that are/were too. KEEP UP THE WRITING! |
by broken angel
This poem has a different ending than I thought it would, and I think that's why I'm obsessed with it. Powerful and stirring, and you deserve every single 5/5 that people voted. I hope you can keep ur head up, because I'd sure as "heck" miss you if u was gone! =) You're an amazing writter, and just a good person. excellent job on this poem! Luv always, kt |
by firexflys
Wow i remember how this feels. i been there but i am okay now i made it out just fine dont worry too much and keep your head up high. only you choice who you are so be the you you want to be i hope you get what io mean. nice job 5.5 |
by Stephy
Its great..good job!-xxxx- |
by Justin
Whoa, amazing poem, you showed alot of emotion in it and expressed yourself very well, also the lines flowed very well together, I think everyone feels like this (or along these lines) atleast once in their life, you just have to stay strong and make it through, get job, 5/5 |
Hey hun thanks so much 4 showing me that u will b ther, i will b ther 4 y0o 2...im sorry that y0o feel as if y0o r falling...i no how y0o feel but i guess wen things seem 2 go wrong hold onto the next best thing, this will go right 4 y0o in life y0o just need 2 hold on, don't runaway it won't deal with anything, just be around people who y0o care about, i luv y0o lots n i hope my advice has helped! luv ya |