Comments : Don't Give Up *jess..to u babe

  • 19 years ago

    by ~â‚£ading |nspiration~

    I hope she won't give up too...and I think I'm gonna say the same thing to you...

    So don't make that choice.
    Be strong and be proud.
    Because you're a wonderful girl,
    You're gonna make it, say it loud.

    You are amazing girl...

  • 19 years ago

    by BeautifulDisaster

    Aw, I can dedicate this to one of my friends aw this is so sad, she feels like giving up tooh Aw, I wish i could make her realise im by her side as well, well done hun this is another awesome poem keep it up love yaa

  • 19 years ago

    by I.Dont.Own.Emotion.I.RENT.

    Cute. i rele like it sry this is so short i gotta run! luv ya sooooo much! ~lex

  • 19 years ago

    by JAY Poet

    Great!!!!!!!!!!

  • 19 years ago

    by lee

    This was a really awesome poem. VERY insirational. :) 5/5!

  • 19 years ago

    by Timothy B

    What I always say, is NEVER give up, EVER. Life is sooo wurth living.

    Great that you stay by her side through it all.

    Tim

  • 19 years ago

    by NannO

    Girl.. this is amazing!! i mean a very sweet dedication adn gr8 words of wisdom.. and especially coming from u.. GIRL, u gotta learn from urself.. hehe.. but that was reli so nice and u even made it rhyme.. i noe this helps u a lot 2 be ther 4 ur frend that uve bin ther, so u can directly relate.. and i hope both of u stand strong 4 each other.. i can see the love that bonds u 2gether.. i especially love ur last stanza...
    love ya girl, never give up
    Nanno
    xoxoxo

  • 19 years ago

    by Matters

    Great, great, great job. It was really inspirational, and I'm sure your friend thanks you. It was really nice of you to write her a poem, and encouraging. After reading that, she should recover. That was really amazing. Fantastic, one of my favorite poets on this site. You have such talent! Nice job.

    ________________________________Matt______________