I hope she won't give up too...and I think I'm gonna say the same thing to you... |
Aw, I can dedicate this to one of my friends aw this is so sad, she feels like giving up tooh Aw, I wish i could make her realise im by her side as well, well done hun this is another awesome poem keep it up love yaa |
Cute. i rele like it sry this is so short i gotta run! luv ya sooooo much! ~lex |
by JAY Poet
Great!!!!!!!!!! |
by lee
This was a really awesome poem. VERY insirational. :) 5/5! |
by Timothy B
What I always say, is NEVER give up, EVER. Life is sooo wurth living. |
by NannO
Girl.. this is amazing!! i mean a very sweet dedication adn gr8 words of wisdom.. and especially coming from u.. GIRL, u gotta learn from urself.. hehe.. but that was reli so nice and u even made it rhyme.. i noe this helps u a lot 2 be ther 4 ur frend that uve bin ther, so u can directly relate.. and i hope both of u stand strong 4 each other.. i can see the love that bonds u 2gether.. i especially love ur last stanza... |
by Matters
Great, great, great job. It was really inspirational, and I'm sure your friend thanks you. It was really nice of you to write her a poem, and encouraging. After reading that, she should recover. That was really amazing. Fantastic, one of my favorite poets on this site. You have such talent! Nice job. |