Oooh, very nice! The imagery is haunting and the flow is superb! I especially like the ending. It tied the entire piece together quite well. Keep it up~Holly

Dang
this poem is really deep. I love your choice of words. Everything flows together perfectly. You are a really good poet.

DemonChild

Thanks to you all, I rarely write dark poetry, but when I do it's usually for a deep reason and is written to display their depth. Be well.

~Sherry~