This is very good. the rhymes flow and dont seem forced, and the actual content its self is very deep.

I really like the poem. It has a good rhyme scheme. Great job.

- SHORT BUT VERY GOOD. I LIKE IT !!! KEEP IT UP !!! I EXPECIALLY LIKE IT CUZ I'VE BEEN IN THAT STATE OF MIND MANY TIMES B4. ROCK ON !!! WEEE :)

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I ♥ CEREAL

Good flow and rhyms and the content is also great

I kno wat u mean...wow gr8 poem...showed a lotta emmotion...thnx 4 replyin 2 my post...n im gunna read a couple more of ur even if u only gave me this 1...5/5!
~*Who Cares?*~

Good Poem,pretty dark and depressive
Good choice of the words,simple and straight

I loved it. my favorite part
"I hate the world around me,
and I hate what I've become,
a creature without feeling,"
it is so true. i loved it so much feeling
great write.
Emma 5/5

REALY LIKE THIS, ITS JUST LIKE SUM OF MY POEMS

Awesome poem, crazy that a lot of people relate to it, nice flow and choice of words, keep it up

I realy like your style or writing