Confused

by shadowlight   Nov 8, 2005


What should i do?
my life is torn in two,
the discovery of a parent,
a man i never knew,
the separation of two people,
and the introduction of a new,
i am torn between two worlds,
two life's separated by time,
i don't know what to do.
then the stepfarther returns,
he knows not of what i know,
thinks i am still ignorant,
so comes back to continue life's original flow,
but now i know the truth,
i know he's living a lie,
secrets i must now keep,
that rip me up inside,
what should i do?
my world is ripped in two.

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  • 18 years ago

    by BlueDreams

    Oh my, what a beautiful sad penned you potray here, simply but well express your emotions write....

  • 18 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    A sad poem, but beautifully expressed. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Sherry Lynn

    Though there are some grammical errors, I can fully understand the confusion that you display.

    I would fix the spelling in a few spots, but it is an emotional piece that you have presented.

    --Sher

  • 18 years ago

    by Dreams

    'then the step-farther returns'
    Is it stepfather? If its not, ignore me.
    'my world is riped in two.'
    Is it ripped?

    Yet another piece of great work. I think you're filled with talent. Great misery, sadness, and confusion here. Nice flow you've there.

  • 18 years ago

    by Lady Vengeance

    Hey, i think this poem is one of your best. it's really well written, great work.
    it's kool how you're a goth, so am i. lo. i havn't actually met very many otehr goths so yeah. sorry for being a bit strange.
    -Suzie

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