In My World

by Little Dot   Nov 8, 2005


Nothing is fair
Nobody will care
Reality is twisted
In my world

It's cold and dark
Will you dare to disembark
Try to find your way
In my world

All you see when you look around
Is death and decay on the ground
It's full of evil
In my world

Can you get out of my world alive
Only the strong can survive
What will happen to you
In my world

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  • 19 years ago

    by Michelle

    Cool poem. Keep up the great work! :o)

    Michelle

  • 19 years ago

    by Sakura

    I really really liked this. Very good. (sounds kinda like a song. ^_^) great job, keep it up!!

  • 19 years ago

    by shadowlight

    This is very good. i like the repitation of "in my world" though out.

  • 19 years ago

    by Ashelin

    I like it, but try adding a descriptive word in "In my world" like in the second stanza you could put "In the depth of my world." that way you still have the feeling of deep darkness.

    It has good flow though, good job!

  • 19 years ago

    by Darien

    That's really cool.
    The last line of every stanza fit nicely.
    Good stuff.

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