Gr8 job.. from the rhyme to the choice of words. i enjoyed reading the poem.. i especially like ur 3rd stanza..
just a note: plz check ur spellings in the first 2 stanzas :)
hmm, bout a title.. i thot uncertainty was gud, but i also thot of "She's Not Sure" since u started all ur stanzas with that line.. ur poem, ur choice.. hope id helped out somehow :D
keep it up
take care
Nannoush

Very good poem.In your fourth line in your first stanza I'm assuming it's supposed to say while not white.

I think a good title 4 this poem is..."he doesn't know" and its a great poem and i really fell in love with it...u r a very great poet and usually feel like this towards my baby and ask myself these questions...5/5 by the way

This is a great poem i liked it a lot :-)

This is a poem that evokes all the joy and enthusiasm of a new love. It's very refreshing and a pleasure to read.

She's not sure that he knows
How on him, she relies
And through all he'll forever be
Gorgeous in her eyes

that was the best part i think

i love your vocab, and i love the way you don't rhyme words like be and me all the time im so jealous lol but im so glad i got to read your stuff cause your most definatly going on my favorites list. i love how i've only read two poems and you've already got like a big range in poem topics i can't do that...your soooo good 5/5

Gr8 gr8 gr8 poem...n i like that u told us a bit about wats it was made 4 n all that...thnx 4 replyin 2 my post...i appreciate it! 5/5!
~*Who Cares?*~

Hey the poem was really good.. it was sweet and it showed alot of emotion. emotion as you know is the life of a poem.. flowed well and would be great to read to your special boy.. nicely done..
I also wanted to say thanks because you commented on one of my poems a while back and you actually gave an honest answer.. which really means alot to me.. so i just wanted to say thanks!!
Byebye EJ