LaSt TimE~*~

by ღPrEciiOuz~KiiZeZღ   Nov 8, 2005


This is the last time
anybody will ever see me
now everybody would feel
how it is to be me

my feelings i tried to hide
trying to hold
my head up
with great pride

slowly everything
started falling apart
the more loneliness
the more pain in my heart

all this is happening
because you left my life
now that your gone
i found comfort in my knife

when you read this
tears will come to your eyes
but remember i was the
one who stuck by you,
even through all your lies

*this one is also dedicated to my baby Marco...well ex baby now...but i just can't find to let him leave my heart...i can't i love him too much...tell me what u think*

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  • 19 years ago

    by Becky

    I think its great and amazing, but the knife is never the answer and it only screws things up trust me

    lots of lvoe
    *~*Becky*~*

  • 19 years ago

    by Mezmeryz

    Hey this is real swet and sad...hope your ok..the poem is good!
    xxx

  • 19 years ago

    by Kayla

    What I think is that... Well I would say you need to move one and let go, but I have been where you are. I was with a guy for 1 year and half, then he just stoped talking to me... the knife and I reunited after 6 months and I thought that I wanted to die, but its not worth it...The pain and the scars! Everyday I have to face them and it makes it harder... yet they are proof that its over... Keep Your head up and never stop writting... You are amazing...

    XOXO
    Kayla

  • 19 years ago

    by TinyDancer46

    Touching and amazing poem, hun...you are so talented... I love the way you express your emotions, and you have a great way with words. Great job!

  • 19 years ago

    by JAY Poet

    I know how you feel!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    great poem!!!

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