I thought the poem was very cute and sweet and meaningful......I didn't think it flowed well tho....make your sentences more even, not so jagged, and you'll have a masterpiece! great joob

I really liked this. It was very sweet and heartfelt. I know how you felt when you said you were scared to let him into your heart. I'm having that problem right now. But yeah, I thought your poem was good. Keep writing and take care.
> Kiesha

Um, jagged.....I meant like, well, the sentences need to be more even so it flows well, not so many words in one and not in the other, the same beat for each sentence.....does that make sense?