by StormyWeather Nov 8, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
I walk around the ring once more |
by xEmmax
Wow, excellent poem! great work, keep it up. 5/5, take care xxx |
Cute....I like the content...very strong and deep...but to be honest...it didn't flow very well...but still...I really like it... |
Yea i just thought about it yea its a good poem but i never wrote like that wen i was your age not that your a babby or anything |
I love the way you described it and everything else about it. It's amazing how well you can write at your age. |
by Sly
Hey...it's a great poem...gonna read some more a little later...keep writing them :) |