Hey...it's a great poem...gonna read some more a little later...keep writing them :)

I love the way you described it and everything else about it. It's amazing how well you can write at your age.

Yea i just thought about it yea its a good poem but i never wrote like that wen i was your age not that your a babby or anything

its like watching through the eyes of buterfly its all cute and all when you see a poppy playing with a buterfly but, the buterfly could die and he knowes it

Cute....I like the content...very strong and deep...but to be honest...it didn't flow very well...but still...I really like it...

Wow, excellent poem! great work, keep it up. 5/5, take care xxx