Oh my god this is a GREAT poem .... i really love it and i understand exactly what u mean by this poem...keep up the great work and welcome back u have been missed...5/5 u deseredv it...kisses

Excellent poem! I can completely relate! The whole thing flowed quite nicely!

Very sweet !
I liked this a lot, it was beautifully written, i can relate to this...
It flows flawlessly all the way through, i can't critique it at all !!!!

xxx cici xxx