I thought it was really good, nice job, great and powerful emotion, and you made me almost know how you feel. One thing to work on- The flow wasn't perfect. It's fine though- that doesn't matter, the poem does, and I give it full points.

This is some deep stuff, if u ask me, i love the way u wirte, i usually dont like poems that dont ryhme, but i really enjoye reading this one, keep up the good job!