This is really good it's short but i still felt like i was reading an entire story about your life

I refuse to waste my whole like chasing

did you mean to say life?

i think the first two lines of this were the best, definatly thanks for all your help too now that i've read your work i appriciate it even more cause i really admire this you have some real talent, 5/5

Great poem, though i think a few more stanzas would be good :-)

Lol, it always comes in handy 2 write poetry wen ur bord...if i nevr wrote poetry wen i was bord in class...id only have like 5 poems...lol..gr8 poem...wow u have a wonderous gift...5/5!
~*Who Cares?*~

Once again the honest truth is that I can't say much you need to improve on. it was short sweet and to the point(in the other way) good job I liked it honestly.

~~Retniapdoolb