by Hannah
That was realii nice i liked it alot u should write more... |
by Krissy
I really like this poem, i feel like this all tha time... great poem. |
by priscella
I really like your poem it is so true |
by priscella
I really like your poem it is so true |
by priscella
I really like your poem it is so true |
That was grrt. i felt the emotion pouring out. awesome. keep writing! |
by Dora
Wow that is really good.....keep it up and can you comment mine please? thanks |
ITS SOO BEUTIFUL!! |
by Mimi
Your a real gud writer, dont stop-cuz u have been given a gift and u can go long ways with it. |
Gr8 poem nice flow loed it keep itup good work leah! |
by Cassidy
Wow i like this alot... it reminds me of me right now. 5/5 |
by Juls
WOW!!!LOVE IT!!!full of emotions, the first stanza really pulled me into it. love it hun |
by abby
Nice |
by Ariana
Very nice, I liked how you repeated the 'dove' idea without making it sound repetitive. Also kuddos for having a long poem that managed to keep my attention :) |
Jaw dropping!! Keep it up... u should publish your poems |
Thanks for your comment! Your poems are great! feel free to e-mail me anytime at ScottsAngelprincess2006@hotmail.com Take care and keep writing! |