Mirror Check

by Tragic Misery   Nov 8, 2005


I think I'm pretty
I thinkI'm nice
I think i could date him
I think I'm as good as her

What the hell am i saying?
I know I am all of these things and more,but you doubting me and not seeing these things in me has killed my self-confindense

Thank you for making me feel no good! All I feel I can do is choose to take this knife and ease my pain by ending my life

A life where everyday I feel less and less worthy to be in your presence

The one thing I can control is to choose life or death, my hand clenches the knife as I choose death and slit my throat taking away my presence I felt I had lost so many years ago in your eyes

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  • 18 years ago

    by ShadowDancer

    Sometimes, like many, i wish i had the strengh to cut my throat. but alas, no. a very moving poem. thanks for ur comment, and keep writing, u'v got talent to be sure

    Ruby

  • 19 years ago

    by Truest Lies

    Almost vulgar in its depressiveness-why do all poets write about death?
    You spelt confidence wrong, btw.

    -beth

  • 19 years ago

    by *~Emma~*

    WOW, this is a really great poem, i can't wait to read more of your writes

  • 19 years ago

    by Syn

    Your writings are good.. keep in touch.

  • 19 years ago

    by Wasted Fake Smiles

    Hey, dun kill urself...i kno its tuff blieve me im goin thro this...but killin urself wun solve nethin...n hoo knos dyin mite end up being worse...anyway....this made me feel very into the poem. 5/5! btw thnx 4 replyin 2 my post i appreciate it!
    ~*Who Cares?*~

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