I like your style of writing.. though mine are all mostly long.. i wish i coudl get the nerve to cut my throat but when i do i chicken out.. i used to cut though.. it sucks.. i'll comment on your others too!! :P lenee.

I think it was just an alright poem to be honest. You show so much potential and I think with a little work you'll reach it. Your poems miss something, you aren't putting enough emotion into it. Pour your heart into it and you'll create something amazing.

Keep on goin

This is such a sad poem ...but i have to say that i dont really like sad poems...but i really seem to like yours...5/5...this is great

Its obvious tht you have a lot of potential. don't think you have quiet reached it yet though. keep writting and you'll get there

Hey, dun kill urself...i kno its tuff blieve me im goin thro this...but killin urself wun solve nethin...n hoo knos dyin mite end up being worse...anyway....this made me feel very into the poem. 5/5! btw thnx 4 replyin 2 my post i appreciate it!
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Your writings are good.. keep in touch.

WOW, this is a really great poem, i can't wait to read more of your writes

Almost vulgar in its depressiveness-why do all poets write about death?
You spelt confidence wrong, btw.

-beth

Sometimes, like many, i wish i had the strengh to cut my throat. but alas, no. a very moving poem. thanks for ur comment, and keep writing, u'v got talent to be sure

Ruby