Thanx to all whove ever commented. i appriciate it (yeah i cant spell) this piece is crap, but the story is real.

Thanx to all whove ever commented. i appriciate it (yeah i cant spell) this piece is crap, but the story is real.

Wow.The emotional impact of this is awesome and something I can definitely relate to.I let go someone special and once realized have suffered the constant haunting pain and sadness.I'm a sap for poems of love and loss.The rhyme scheme gives this a smooth flow, but it's the emotion that cries out and grabs one.I really like the last stanza, the final line is a killer.Great poem.

Oh my gosh this is such an awesome poem!! But its sad tho.. hope ur okay hunn.. if u need ne one to talk to.. i'll always be free to listen.. ur a great writer.. keep writting.. and thanks for your comment on that poem.. it meant alot to me.. much love.

Hey that poem is like the best poem sum1 could ever write!it was so real and had so much feeling!im sure that if ur xbf loves u he will cum bak!and dont eva think 4 a second that breaking up wif him was a regret coz if it didnt happen u wouldnt relise how much u need n love him!i love ur poems always n cant wait 2 read more! keep strong and always shine in the specail way u do!luv ....josie.....

Woooow!!ur a talented writer!!dont worry...i know the feeling...maybe u gotta move on!?i dont think they ever come back...they just leave u to suffer in silence...but i'll always be here2help!!:)great poem!!keep it up!!xxxxx