Comments : Can i be your everything?

  • 19 years ago

    by shadowlight

    This poem is really good, very expressive

  • 19 years ago

    by Mezmeryz

    Great poem. its beautiful...sweet. keep up the good work!:)
    thanks for the comment!

  • 19 years ago

    by Jacqui Armstrong

    A great poem and i can relate!

    Jacs
    xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by CE

    I know it's a bit long but it would
    mean so much to me if you all would R/R/C and i'll do the same

    It could have been 2pages long and it still would have been GREAT good job on this one, one of your best

  • 18 years ago

    by dora

    Such a t0uching and beautiful p0em. u r very talented. i really enj0y reading ur w0rk. its always amazing and great. keep up the great w0rk darl!!!
    l0tz 0f l0ve /d0ra