Comments : Dark Butterfly

  • 19 years ago

    by HOLLY ARMER

    I think its good. I think it really delves into your inner thoughts. Perhaps portrays the confusion you are feeling. There are a few misspelled words in this line:

    "that will reginize it wondurace grace"

    It should be,

    "that will recognize it's wondrous grace"

    Other than those little typo's its quite good. Keep it up~Holly

  • 19 years ago

    by jodie

    Well writtin loved it

  • 19 years ago

    by Pure Silence

    Wonderful:D I loved it, btw I LOVEEE Butterflies, soo much lol keep it up and coming

    Jenn
    3

  • 18 years ago

    by brian stryker

    This poem is good, it shows how your spirit mind feels, i like it.

  • 18 years ago

    by Mighty442

    I enjoyed this poem, one of your best if I may be so bold.

  • 17 years ago

    by Tom Martin

    Very very good writing, Jocelina. Very nice concept.