by HOLLY ARMER
I think its good. I think it really delves into your inner thoughts. Perhaps portrays the confusion you are feeling. There are a few misspelled words in this line: |
by jodie
Well writtin loved it |
by Pure Silence
Wonderful:D I loved it, btw I LOVEEE Butterflies, soo much lol keep it up and coming |
This poem is good, it shows how your spirit mind feels, i like it. |
by Mighty442
I enjoyed this poem, one of your best if I may be so bold. |
by Tom Martin
Very very good writing, Jocelina. Very nice concept. |