by michelle Nov 9, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
The emergency vehicles were still heading up-towards her school. |
by Matters
This comment is for both parts of this poem: Fantastic job. Obviously, rhyming doesn't matter to you, which is fine, because you make it great. This poem was so sad, I couldn't stop reading. As soon as I finished Part I, I hurried up to read Part II. All in all, great job. Full points. |