Beautiful...I love it. Full of emotion and love. Wonderful truly wonderful!Keep it up I love ur work hun
Juls

Awesome poem keep it up!

Awesome poem! Great description!

Nice! Wonderful imagery!

Naomi....That Poem is like WOW....very good....Its left me speechless! Great work hun!
Love Julie
XOXOX

Wow, Naomi! That's amazing. It's beautiful. I love how you ended it. Very well written, sweetheart. Keep it up. *hugs* Love you!

~Jessica

That poem was great i wish i could write that good

I liked the poem alot. It's wording and rhyme was great. Your really good keep up the good work.

I loved it really. its a gud poem naomz. i love ya take care. hugs and kisses 5/5

I loved it...thx for commenting on mine..

Hey sweety,
brilliant peom....luved it..keep it up ok...luv ya.luv dia mwaz tc xoxo