The emotions in your poem overwhelmed me. You allowed your reader to share just a glimpse of your pain. Hang in there you are stronger than you think. You stopped before and you will do it again. my favourite verse is the third last one. There are those who will be there for you just let them help. keep writing to I think you are helping others with your words

Really good and excently worded people can totally relate to it love it it should be a song

Your first few stanzas were amazing, and then you sort of trailed off. Over all though it was really quite good.

Many people go through the same thing, i have, i hadn't cut for i think it was liek 5 and a half months then i broke down, i felt so guilty and weak, but its ok its natural to feel like that, this poem si amazing, i am astonished by the writers on P&Q and jealousa s well, great writing, 5/5

lots of love
*~*Becky*~*

I no wat that feels like! i hhadnt been suicidal in 6 months then summit happend. i fell back deeper than any other time. and started to cut, and take overdoses again! im still at the pit of my depression. and a lot of the people i have chatted to on msn that i met on this ave helped me through it more than my other m8s!

I want to start off by saying excellent poem . I know how you feel . I have been in your shoes on numerous occasions . Sometimes it feels as if though lifes not worth living, and you think you'll be better off dead . But your wrong, and everything will be ok. I'm here if you need a new friend or a somebody to lean on .

P.S. please take a look at my poetry and leave a comment, or look for my email address and we can talk .

Aww youre poem was soo awesome it is one of the best poems i have ever read i really loved it and i reALLY THINK IT WILL BE OK CAUSE IF ITS NOT THEN ITS NOT THE END

I know what its like to not cut for so long and then one night that knife looks like its the only thing left for u... I have dont it so many times. I guess sometimes it is the only thing there but is it really the right thing... I hate myself everytime i fall to the knife... hope things get better
5/5
~*|*~Suicidal Tears~*|*~

Hey I know what that feeling is like. I cut a couple weeks agao and it had literally been like 7months. I was so ushamed and I knew I was so wrong but When I went to my heavenly father he took me back right away. My family probably wouldn't have understood but he did. I went to get a help over a year ago and have been out for several months but it is hard to relearn new behavior in a tough situation when it feels like no one is there. Don't beat yourself up but get up off the ground and try again. We aren't perfect and never will be remember that. Also you can't fight this alone. Go to some to keep you accountable that you can trust to be there. But in the end it all comes out to who you give your life to at the end of the day. You can't do this with out God in it. I don't now ifyou believe in him or not but you can't do it without him. I tried and failed everytime. I have to tell myself that I am a different person even when I do make mistakes because I have come so far. There is hope in this dying world. Hold on.
gabby

Oh baby, my heart goes out to you hunny. You are so amazing for fighting as well as you are, and all I can say it to not give up. We all fall, but what matters is that we get back up after. I am a cutter too, and after being through a lot and almost dying quite a few times, I started to turn my life around a bit. I still struggle and fight everyday, but that's what matters you know? That you are trying. If you need someone you are welcome to talk to me, just send me a comment on one of my poems, (it doesn't have to be about them, but that's a way to get a hold of me.) Good luck sweetheart. I have faith it you, so much faith. You poem was beautiful and so is you effort in trying to quit. Love ya hun!

-Tainted Mikochan

What does it do to you i love this poem but what does cuting do to you it just makes you fill weak if yo wanted to die i don't know but why do you want to doe or cutyour self

Wow! i'm glad u lykd me poem...its how i really feel...everyone thinks that i'm okay..HA! w/e...but yea...i like your poems they put my feelings into words

Seriously sweetie your not the only one that gets that low. but you have to hang in there. not to sound morbid or anything but i loved your poem it was really awesome.

take care!!

I thought that poem was GREAT! there are so many times i feel like that and i dont. sometimes it freaks me out though when i write my feelings into poems and how they sound when im done
amms

Hey hun
I cant say I know how you feel, because I am not you. But I can relate to it. Ive been cutting for 4 years, and its so hard. I always say I'll stop. But.. its what I know and how U deal with it. The reason Im here today, is because I know theres people I'd be hurting if I left..

if you ever wanna talk, my email is

mmsaint666@hotmail.com

I really like it alot i can understand it i go through that all the time aswell its hard not do it yet its so easy to do it

Hey gurl!... i reallyl ike this poem and wen u feel like your at your lowest point and theres noone tot turn to .. you feel the knife is your only friend and you tell youself your not going to do it but u end up doing it anyway... and then after words they are no longer scars of pain they're scars of embarassment.. and you dont want anyway to see bceasue ur afraid of what they'll say and your ashamed of yourself because u lied to yourself!.. but u know the knife is only ur best friend for a little while and it does no gud!! and if you seriously feel like you cant take it nomore and theres noone there then write me or gimmie a call and i'll help you get through it!!!... hells knife is what i call it and ITS A TEMPTATION NOT A DESIRE!
luv u!!!!.... Kelly

Wow. This is truly amazing. But you shouldn't be upset, from what I see you have a lot of friends to cheer you up just look at all these comments. Gosh, this is really great poem, and I am stunned. But...Yeah

Don't worry, nobody can blame you, at least you tried, you managed to stop, some people don't even get that far! Amazing poem anyway, keep writing!
Luv Helen xxx