Wow.l.that was a great poem. I might not know what the whole story behind all this is, but i definately could relate to some of those feelings...especially this bit:
"excuses to live with a reason to die
messes my mind, kills my skin
leaves my hand on my head
and my eyes so dry
making me look above once again
screaming for the end to this pain"

That was truly heartwrenching..
keep writing, never give up xoxoxox

O0oh...r u saying 2 kids it's meaningless...ok then...I don't think I'm a kid though...can I leave a comment? Well honestly...it takes me 4 awhile 2 understand this poem...I hev 2 read it twice...and 2 be honest...it's really hard 2 read it loud...cause it doesn't flow properly...and so I read it in my heart...and hmm...I think the content is pretty good...you use words that I seldom see...and ur style is quite unique...but I can only giv u a 4 4 this...cause I don't think it's very good...

Hi nitin
i think i hav read many of ur poems. but this seems to be a bit long. and frankly speaking it was nt easy 2 understand at once. but yeah the contents wer nice. but after reading all ur poems i wish i could read a cheeerful poem from ur side.
if u can express ur grief so beautifully then just think how nicely u can express love which i think is most beautiful thing in this world.
well its up 2 u. but still i wish i could...
luv, bharti

Wow tht wuz really long and really deep i can really relate good job 5/5 like alwayz
xox

Ok.. see now i get it... goodness, there is so much depth in you--- it'll take such a long time for me to understand.... but hey, it's all good..
I must say, it was a beautiful peice of work with feelings that many of us don't have a realization for... but you have expressed it in such a simple manner--- I loved it... keep writing...

**I would love to see you smile**
May it be in reality or through your words....

Love,
Ipsita

I have been living this poem of yours for such a long time that I can feel every word of it. So amazingly you decribed your life and it reflected right in to mine. It was like as if I was staring at myself in the mirror and reading the reflections of my life.

Absolutely mind blowing. I loved it, loved it, loved it!!!

Nitin
Very deep and emotional piece you have penned...It's hard for me to see you in this light...You have become my rock....you were brought into my life for a reason...you have given me the will to go on..This poem brought me to tears.

multiple identities is what they say
when I realize that I am loosing my face everyday
with no plans for future
and no care of past
I am a guy asking myself
why should i stay alive today?

Because there are so many who love and need you :)
Love you dost
Cindy