Couldnt handle it

by Lestat   Nov 9, 2005


You were there when i cried
Even though you never knew why
You were there when i nearly died
Even though you didn't know why..
One day it rained
Outside and inside my heart
Because you found out why
And it pushed us apart

You couldn't handle the pain
You couldn't handle the lies
You couldn't handle the truth
So you said your bye byes

Filled with sorrow
I sit here today
Wondering if ill see you tomorrow
But tomorrow never comes
And neither does the sun
Because you couldn't handle it
The fact that I'd gone through sh*t
I thought we were joined at the hip
But you couldn't handle the pain
This truly is a broken friendship

.lestat.

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  • 18 years ago

    by claire

    This 1's good i like the middle bit the best but all of it is really good
    lv claire
    xxxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by claire

    This 1's good i like the middle bit the best but all of it is really good
    lv claire
    xxxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Sole

    So sad! I have a suggestion, you could change the line

    So you said your bye byes

    to

    So you said your goodbyes

    It makes it a little less informal - and slightly more sincere.

    Peace. [Sole]

  • 18 years ago

    by *Alanna*

    Too good

  • 19 years ago

    by SSSAAMMMYY

    WoW! Great job! This seems to be a deep yet meaningful poem! I LOVE it! Keep up the great work! I'm looking foreward to more of your poems!
    ~Sammy

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