I liked it, u should read mine sumtime.....PENGUINS RULE!!!

Oh my god Outcast!! That literally made me cry. It reminded me so much of Romeo and Juliet....

Wow this is a really good poem you have talentand that is a hard thing to finde these days because people just write stuff that they dont really care about but i can see that you do.keep up the good work.
deff 5/5

Again... great poem!!! well done! 5/5!

michelle

That's a great poem but it's kinda funny but like it's messed up. 5/5
-Vino