by Lu Nov 9, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
As I walked down the hallway |
by neens
Wow... that one was a tear jerker. Maybe someday you will find out what ever became of that boy. |
by Karla Gordon
Very beautiful.. made me cry! |
Brilliently inspirational! i loved every stanza of it (in the way it flowed and was worded, not the upsetting story). This poem was passionate, creatively worded and had a powerful story to it. well done indeed, this is certainly the best poem i've read in a while |
by Chelsey
Luanne, I am in tears...the sad poems you write are behind sad,...they are horrible....you don't write horrible (you know that obviously I'm writing something with you lol), but these things you tell are just so horrible to hear!! I mean I read this and in the third stanza I was already bawling. You have such a sweet heart to remember such a thing, but I too have a hospital memory of someone I didn't know..Your writing is amazing Luanne and I'm honored to have you on my fave's list! This is amazing and shows how kind of a person you are! I love ya and loved this poem! |
by Ann Stareyes
Luanne |