Luanne
Things like this....seeing them and hearing their painful cries is heartbreaking....and it surely touches our hearts..... and those memories can remain with us of wondering if they did make it and if they're O.K. touching piece....You have a beautiful heart that cares so much....thanks for sharing and maybe he is O.K.
Love Ann

Luanne, I am in tears...the sad poems you write are behind sad,...they are horrible....you don't write horrible (you know that obviously I'm writing something with you lol), but these things you tell are just so horrible to hear!! I mean I read this and in the third stanza I was already bawling. You have such a sweet heart to remember such a thing, but I too have a hospital memory of someone I didn't know..Your writing is amazing Luanne and I'm honored to have you on my fave's list! This is amazing and shows how kind of a person you are! I love ya and loved this poem!
~Chelsey~

Brilliently inspirational! i loved every stanza of it (in the way it flowed and was worded, not the upsetting story). This poem was passionate, creatively worded and had a powerful story to it. well done indeed, this is certainly the best poem i've read in a while

Brad

Very beautiful.. made me cry!

Wow... that one was a tear jerker. Maybe someday you will find out what ever became of that boy.
~neens~