Give to me

by Fallengod667   Nov 10, 2005


Give me the strength,
to carry on,
when all my hope,
has fled and gone.

Give me the power
that i need,
to face the pain,
of my past deeds.

Give me the love,
of all my friends
when my world,
comes to an end.

Give me the freedom,
to make the choice,
to take my soul,
and give it a voice.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Naerwen

    It sounds as if i am saying this, so much is felt through a few simple lines, well done yet again fallengod

    Naerwen The Chosen Bride of White Rabbit

  • 19 years ago

    by VioletRaven

    Damn. Sorry. Well it's good enough for two comments.

  • 19 years ago

    by VioletRaven

    I like the way, in this poem and your others, that you can portray depth with such simplicity. It is a talent indeed. Beautiful poem. 5/5
    *VioletRaven*

  • 19 years ago

    by VioletRaven

    I like the way, in this poem and your others, that you can portray depth with such simplicity. It is a talent indeed. Beautiful poem. 5/5
    *VioletRaven*

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