I like the way, in this poem and your others, that you can portray depth with such simplicity. It is a talent indeed. Beautiful poem. 5/5
*VioletRaven*

I like the way, in this poem and your others, that you can portray depth with such simplicity. It is a talent indeed. Beautiful poem. 5/5
*VioletRaven*

Damn. Sorry. Well it's good enough for two comments.

It sounds as if i am saying this, so much is felt through a few simple lines, well done yet again fallengod

Naerwen The Chosen Bride of White Rabbit