Comments : The End

  • 18 years ago

    by VioletRaven

    I love all of it but especially the second stanza. I think a lot of us have demons, but believe in yourself, that you can fight them.
    Love all of your poems, will definitely be reading more.
    *VioletRaven*

  • 18 years ago

    by VioletRaven

    Deep and true. I like the end being a rhetorical question, it really makes the reader think about it.
    Great poem
    *VioletRaven*

  • 18 years ago

    by VioletRaven

    Sorry. Ignore that.

  • 18 years ago

    by Naerwen

    Indeed your payment is past due, yet our demons will never cease. This is great poem, i admire your writing.

    Naerwen The Chosen Bride of White Rabbit

  • 18 years ago

    by xXxDarkDreamerxXx

    Once again you have blown me away!!!
    5/5 ^_^

  • 17 years ago

    by john graver

    I really enjoy the way you write!