Don't go. I will miss you, Sammy. :)

Thank you so much. Yes, this has very deep meaning. It actually just happend this past weekend. Im having alot of trouble with coping but im makn it. thank you so much or your comment. I like this poem... ive thought about that exact thought many times b4.

I like this poem. its very well written.

So very sad i hate to see it when some one feel this way i wish in some way i could help. i hope you'll be ok .. nice job 5.5

I think you meant "corner" in line three. There's another typo in line 6, and line 8. This line, "By I guess no one could save my fall" just confuses me. I'm going to assume that you mean "but" instead of "by", but how does someone save your fall?

Other than that it was a good effort.

Please do not ever hurt yourself. Its really not worth it. Really. Life will eventually get better. Believe me. It always does, eventually. And, well, I've been a cutter since thirteen. I am now seventeen and doing better though and have no desire to hurt myself whatsoever, because I love myself enough. You just have to find your true self. First of all, you're good at poetry, and many other things, as I can definitely see.... If you ever need a friend, I will always be here to listen, ALWAYS.... Don't forget.

((((((Big Hugs)))))

Michelle

You really capture the loneliness, the alienation, the utter despair.We all feel lonely sometimes-but there is a difference between being lonely and being alone.This could use a little touching up, nothing major.It is written well and conveys so much emotion(the trauma and the drama, which is in a lot of my stuff).The ending 5 linesare very strong and excellently done.Keep writing!

Great poem. its written in a very effective mannor and really expresses the emotions well

This is an awsome poem! 5/5!

Very good poem 5/5...I can relate to it a lot

Nice writing:). Anyone can relate to it, it's simple yet effective. I love it. Keep writing. 5/5. You've expressed the emotions well in this poem. *awesome*. P.S: if you get the chance take a look at some of my new poems.
-xoxo,keep the good memories alive.

Don't go, i'll miss your wonderful poems!!! *_*