Wow, this is one of my favs. That was really excellent. You write poems so well, they are all so amazing!

Chantelle

I love the first stanza, it captured my interest straight away, and the rest of the poem follows beautifully. This poem really spoke to me.
Keep Writing,
*VioletRaven*

This poem i can relate to, feeling of just giving up yet we go on anyway to hopefully find meaning in it all. I really liked this poem.

Naerwen The Chosen Bride of White Rabbit