Great poem. |
by Darien
That is a very well written poem. An inspiration to a lot of people I would hope. It's good to know that you stop, if you ever did do it. Keep stong, and keep writing. I enjoyed this poem. |
by Megadrive
That... is very, very cool=D I really like this poem. my only tip is try using ,.! helps the reader pause when u want them to, and break and everything, gives ur poem a since of... beat I guess, and of course makes it more, pretty and just more Organized. other then that great job=D |
Nice poem i like it alot keep writing |