Aww, thats real sad but a good poem, 5/5. take care and stay strong.

Omg.Wow.all i know is im sorry for what you went threw.I know how it feels,but im not compairing.Excellent.

That is the sadest poem i have ever heard i am veary sorry that hase ever happend to you you cant talk to me if you want

Man...I hate when these things happen...I never had a friend who commited suicide...and I will never 1 them 2...no offense Tina...I'm not trying 2 insult anyone here...but 2 be honest...this is wot I think...when u die...someone else dies 4 u...when the someone else dies...another dies...so u c...whoever commit suicide...is very selfish...I know they want peace(I want that 2)...I know they 1 happiness(I 1 that 2)...but I will never kill myself...if u don't 1 ur love ones 2 die...then don't ever kill urself...seriously...even if u ask them not 2 follow...they will...and if now u 2 do the same...how will u know 4 sure....that someone else might not die because of u?!

I'm so sorry 2 say all this Tina...this poem bring me 2 tears...and I hope u won't do the same...please...stay strong...luv ya hun...now and always...Jane

Tears in my eyes now, this poem touched my heart more than ever....I know all the things about your friends and their suicides and I know that you wanted to leave too, let me say that I am so proud of you for being strong and for being alive, I know how hard life is....I just can't believe that Stephanie and Vanessa killded them self because of Dannielle, that is so sad....

Tina, my best friend
Always there until the end
Though I'm setting myself free
Promise to never follow me

Please don't ever follow, like I told you before, Dannielle wants you to live and be happy, your wounds will heal some day!!! I am always here for you girl, you better know that!!! Please be strong...

*Much Love Sabrina*

Hold on girl, be strong. she may have given you something to die for but now you need to remember what it is you live for: love, friendship, and all those other things danielle wanted you to have. don't blame her, and don't blame yourself, and remember:
There is no such thing as right or wrong, just the consequences of your actions. Think about the consequences hun...

x . AbBi . x

Wow that is amazing! You have been through so much and the emotion really comes out. The wording is amazing! And you have amazing talent! Wonderful.....

Brooke

Hey, this is an amazing poem, so it follows the rest of you work. i really liked this bit,

And I also attempted suicide
I was dreaming to lay dead by your side
I tried so hard to join you
But I'm still here, no matter what I do

i'm sorry to say, but i'm not sorry you didn't get what you wanted there, because if you had died it would have been a waste of so much amazing talent, and it would be more incentive to others to give in too.

you are an amazing person to have been through all that and still be here, never let it in, never let it take control.

good work, keep goin.

xXx

Oh my god...that is horrible...suicide is a horrible thing...i've tried and i'm still here but plz girl dont try again.if you need to talk i'm here to listen. hugs-hayley

Wow thats amazing! Its so full of emotion and written in such a beautiful way. keep it up and stay stong xx

Hey, great job!! I'm glad your attempt didn't succeed!! I hope you are stronger becuz of what you have went through!! Hang in there!! Great job!! 5/5 Keep writing!

Omg those to poems are soooo good! i love them. danny was a rele great writer...and you are a rele great writer. all your poems are just so amazing. you rele have a great gift. i'm so sry about Danny, Steph, and Vanessa. but plez don't follow in their footsteps. keep on living,...for them. 5/5 lyl~lex

Omg hunny thats sad. im soo sorry your friends all left but maybe thats the reason you should stay to prove that you can xox

Oh baby. I have read many of your poems in the past, and I have seen the pain that your friend has put you through and the pain the others you love are it. It is so hard to loose a friend and you have all the rights in the world to be anger at her. Hunny, I love you and I know you are strong enough to win this fight, b/c the difference between you and Danny is that you know the effects that you will have on others if you leave them. Don't like the cycle continue hun, don't. I know its hard, and these words on paper can't fight for you, but I know you can still do this. You are strong, and one day you will help save the lives of other poor girls who think they want to die. Thank you for writing your poems, they mean a lot to me. I have tried to kill myself seven times, but your poems have been one of the factors that stopped me from trying an 8th time. Thank you for that. I will be here for you, so please don't go.

-Tainted Mikochan

Omg i cried so hard when i read these. thats hella sad. im sorry :((

Omg I'm actually crying with this poem.. and that very rarely happens.. no matter how sad they are This is like the 2nd one thats caused tears in my eyes.. I am SOOO sorry about your lose. I've been there before and its really hard, I can't say it gets better because it doesn't it just gets a little easier to live with. Take care and try to keep your head up even though I know its hard. I am very sorry.... on another note.. I love the way that you wrote from the different perspectives. Interesting and very creative I liked it. Nice job 5/5 but I would give it a perfect 10 if I had the option.

Omg thats soo sad ... its soo nice that she wrote u guys apoem b4 she let her self go to tell u she loved u guys and stuff. im truley sry it was to much to take for ur othere2 friends ..im very sry bout ur loss..,,,, great poem though!

Very well written